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The wind won't be ignored

Whistling and bellowing,

Shuddering the windows


Its persistence makes me uneasy

Suggesting to my soul something forbidden

Encouraging a silenced voice

An impulse that,

Like the ravens,

Wants to dance in the wind

I always wanted to be a singer
UNFINISHED
 

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Jan Olsen
Jan Olsen on Sunday, 10 March 2019 08:22

Powerful, I love your poem in so many ways.

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Powerful, I love your poem in so many ways.
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Mary Neighbour
Mary Neighbour on Sunday, 10 March 2019 09:31

I hear you, fellow raven lover!

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I hear you, fellow raven lover!
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Hannah Neighbour
Hannah Neighbour on Sunday, 10 March 2019 21:49

This poem excites me - the refusal of the wind to be ignored/ the uneasiness/the forbidden/the long silenced voice emerging/the impulse/the dancing ravens. Yes, dance, dance, dance!!!

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This poem excites me - the refusal of the wind to be ignored/ the uneasiness/the forbidden/the long silenced voice emerging/the impulse/the dancing ravens. Yes, dance, dance, dance!!!
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