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Response to Creative Prompt w/o March 18

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Blue scrubs covering veins that bulge 

from years of hours of standing, saving lives

stop beside a shiny penny

glistening in the sun

then move on

lucky enough for now

Ham Sa
The Eve of the White Buffalo
 

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Jan Olsen
Jan Olsen on Monday, 18 March 2019 08:53

great prompt,
results in great poem.
is this a haiku?

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great prompt, results in great poem. is this a haiku?
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Hannah Neighbour
Hannah Neighbour on Monday, 18 March 2019 11:02

I love how so much story can be conveyed and curiosity sparked by just a few lines. That "lucky enough for now" really gets me.

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I love how so much story can be conveyed and curiosity sparked by just a few lines. That "lucky enough for now" really gets me.
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Mary Neighbour
Mary Neighbour on Saturday, 06 April 2019 11:19

Ah, Jenny: I want more of this story!

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Ah, Jenny: I want more of this story!
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