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THE NEW MOON

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In the periphery a light 


In the dead of night

I see the shuttered moon
Behind thin clouds

A gentle light

The moon revealed

It is a perfect square
Mid-day Light
Someone invited me...
 

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Mary Neighbour
Mary Neighbour on Friday, 03 April 2020 08:58

This is so enigmatic! It invites me to explore meaning. It reminds me of being a child and watching a star through my window--it was there every night. It comforted me. I was too young to realize it shouldn't be in the same spot every night. How long before I realized it was light from the street lamp, refracting off a crack in the glass?

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This is so enigmatic! It invites me to explore meaning. It reminds me of being a child and watching a star through my window--it was there every night. It comforted me. I was too young to realize it [u]shouldn't[/u] be in the same spot every night. How long before I realized it was light from the street lamp, refracting off a crack in the glass?
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Hannah Neighbour
Hannah Neighbour on Friday, 03 April 2020 11:24

Ah!! I love this Jan. For me it brings up the idea of questioning everything during this time. There is also just something so exquisite about the image of the moon as a square.

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Ah!! I love this Jan. For me it brings up the idea of questioning everything during this time. There is also just something so exquisite about the image of the moon as a square.
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